Roughing out some feedback change's

Ok so my last feedback got lots of help, I went and watched toy story 1, the truck scene then i watched toy story 2 & 3 and of course ! and what was in almost every conversational piece between two character's the one being spoken to was not moving or barely moving at all. So i made a few change's from my last one i had him fiddling with his t shirt and i tried a new take on that where he was in a  moving hold type of pose but i felt that was still distracting because i just kept looking at what was in his hands, Then I tried another one which was similar to the above video except i had him leaning away from the person speaking, and he was a bit more active which i thought was still just a bit over animated so i delete that again and decided to have him leaning in towards the guy who is speaking to try and lead the eye a bit more. 

Then i was about the camera angle and all the shot's which are cutting away and after my comments from yesterdays showing of our current animation, I got some comments about if it was necessary to have all those different camera angle's and perhaps just having the entire thing from one shot could work, So ive been sitting here today butchering it up and im going to try have a new version from this one shot, i might have a second shot in it for when he's freaking out. So im going to try have a max of two shot's. 

So i change the camera postion, Its giving me some thing i dont want like his hands covering his face at points il have to tweak that a bit, and clean up the parts going through the objects. 

The only thing im going to rework the second half of the animation, which is not going to be really messy as  i dont want their backs to the camera.

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Im just going to stick all my new passes below huzzahh

Just been trying a few things out with the camera, my enemy all year camera work.

Here's the Version 2 work i done yesterday, still in a semi blocking state